Practice simplifying and clarifying complex contract language. Focus on removing legalese, shortening sentences, and making the clause accessible to a general audience while maintaining legal precision.
Your Task
Edit the contract clause below to improve its clarity and readability. Your goals:
- Simplify complex language - Replace legalese with plain English
- Break up long sentences - Aim for sentences under 25 words
- Remove redundancies - Cut unnecessary words and phrases
- Maintain legal meaning - Don't change the legal effect of the clause
Tips
- "Herein," "whereas," "aforementioned" can usually be cut
- Replace "shall" with "will" or "must" where appropriate
- Use active voice instead of passive voice
- Define terms before using them
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